Celebrities should be allowed to keep their private lives private, without the invasion of the media



Celebrities should be allowed to keep their private lives private, without the invasion of the media




       Nowadays, there are a lot of celebrities. Moreover, one of the most important questions is their privacy. So, the question is: should paparazzi keep away from them or not?

     It is well-known that celebrities have a colorful and interesting life. They are public people.  They act in films, theatre, sing, do charity work or even work in politics. On the one hand, they know how to behave themselves, they used to be seen by other people. Nevertheless, sometimes paparazzi invade in celebrities’ personal lives. Besides, it could be even dangerous. One of the main examples is the death of Princess Diana. One of the reasons was those very paparazzi. Luckily, in some countries, like France that is well known to respects the lives of celebrities and their kids. Unfortunately, in other places like Hollywood try to even make conflict with them. Media attention can affect everyone's life from celebrities and their families to ourselves. 


         On the other hand, there are pros and cons in every choice of profession and celebrities make no exception to such a rule. In a way of reckoning, were their lives to be so private and distant from the public, they would not be called celebrities. For instance, a soldier chooses to risk his life bravely. Moreover, their job is not so difficult as someone's else. 

          To sum up, so many men, so many thoughts. Every opinion is essential. As for me,  there is no doubt that celebrities are also people with their own lives which must be kept in privacy.



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  1. Hello Natasha,

    You've written quite a lot on the topic but not quite according to the requirements of the task you had. You had to use supporting evidence from some resource in which examples from the lives of the celebrities are given. You had to summarize it and use as one of the sources of your supporting evidence.

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  2. Also, your thesis statement is formulated as a question, which cannot be done because by definition the thesis statement must be a statement. A question can be used as a hook to start your essay, for example.

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